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Thursday, December 9, 2010
earthqake by Jared
One morning a boy named ruben had just gotten out of his hiding place because there had been a big earthqake. When ruben went outside he saw a huge crack in the road, floods, smashed briges, toppled towers, water and mud! millions of questuins poping in and out of his head. how much would it be to pay to fix everything? Ruben couldent control himself until he got a close look at a colapsed building!
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