Earthquake By Olivia Mount

LI: To use powerful words to make emotion in my writing

"Its an earthquake," yelled Renee. 
"Get under the desk Renee and take William under too," shivered mum.

Finally it was over Renee, William and Jimmy ran outside to see all the damage to the city.
 Renee turned to look at their house.
 "WOW!" cried Jimmy.
 "Where’s our chimney gone and what is that water stuff is in the front yard."
"That’s called liquefaction and our chimney is um?” said Renee.
"There is the chimney," said William gloomly pointing at the chimney on the ground.

"Should we explore that big hole over there Renee?"said Jimmy.
"Yeah guess we could but I hope it doesn’t swallow us up," said Renee cheerlessly looking round at the distinguished city.

"Oh cheer up sis this is very very interesting," declared William looking exited!
 "Careful Jimmy, “screamed Renee with a look of apprehension on her face!! 
After a little while Renee finally realized they needed to have a little fun before they started the big clean up, but she still felt her heart was crushed.  

Just then her dad came out.
"Breakfast you three," he shouted.
“But dad we are having so much fun" they all groaned!!!

earthqake by Jared

One morning a boy named ruben had just gotten   out of his hiding place because there had been a big earthqake. When ruben went outside he saw a huge crack in the road, floods, smashed briges, toppled towers, water and mud! millions of questuins poping in and out of his head. how much would  it be to pay to fix everything? Ruben couldent control himself until he got a close look at a colapsed building!